Is it “I…am obese” or I…am…obese---I think a full minute on the stereotypes is too much, I think it pulls the guilt too hard, save some of it for later—the commandments shouldn’t be a statement, it should be a question, where does it come from?—you don’t get cooked steak at a grocery store—talking about the word fat would be good, I don’t know if its coming yet (3 min in) but you might want to consider it—sources? More explanation at least—no one is going to think people who are unhealthy are beautiful?
First Audible Practice--7/29 (Baxter)
Is it “I…am obese” or I…am…obese---I think a full minute on the stereotypes is too much, I think it pulls the guilt too hard, save some of it for later—the commandments shouldn’t be a statement, it should be a question, where does it come from?—you don’t get cooked steak at a grocery store—talking about the word fat would be good, I don’t know if its coming yet (3 min in) but you might want to consider it—sources? More explanation at least—no one is going to think people who are unhealthy are beautiful?